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These are pictures of dreams I took
I place them all together in one book

So you can take a look upon them, once or twice
Living the dream, but for what price?

Yes for daydreaming you have to pay
Though facing reality you can't delay

That's why I close the book
With pictures of dreams I took

Today I face reality
Live a life of mortality

For everything will once be past
It's not the earthly life that lasts

But the pictures of dreams I took
Live forever in the book

Feel free to have a look
Watch the pictures in the book

The pages are all white
Yes, dreams do hide

For dreams only excist in your mind
It's a dream in reality you have to find
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22 february 2008

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:iconladyluminous:
wowie ^^ *impressed*

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Beauty belongs to everyone, not just to the pretty people.
:iconx-jett-x:
very good >.<

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Melt your headaches, call it home....
:icongreeneyedmoment:
:blushes: thanks

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~May the moon and the stars shine upon you~
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:icongreeneyedmoment:
:blushes: thank you

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~May the moon and the stars shine upon you~
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:iconx-jett-x:
np, np

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Melt your headaches, call it home....
:iconbilly-quicksilver:
I like it :) it has a nice rhyming effect

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- Jill
:icongreeneyedmoment:
that was its purpose;)

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~May the moon and the stars shine upon you~
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:iconsharnia:
Very nice concept. I really like the idea behind this and you put it forth beautifully.
However I found some verses to be quite long which interrupted the flow of the poem; especially the second couple of verses.

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Triste est omne animal post coitum.

"Caught a lite sneeze. Dreamed a little dream.
Made my own pretty hate machine."
:icongreeneyedmoment:
maybe you're right..I always find myself in trouble finding the right rythm/flow...

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~May the moon and the stars shine upon you~
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